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What Life Is Like Without You by =mskate:iconmskate:

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What Life Is Like Without You

If You were to ask me
What my life is like without you
I would tell you..

Ask a Blind Man
Who will never see the morning sun rise
Or the crystal blue waves crashing upon the shore

Ask a paralyzed person
Who will never dance to their favourite music
Or be able to complain that their feet hurt from walking all day

Ask a childless woman, unable to conceive
Who will never feel her Childs arms around her
Or hear the word “Mom”

Ask an elderly woman in mourning
Who’s just lost her husband of 50 years
And will spend every night sleeping alone

Ask an elite athlete
Who has been training their entire life for this opportunity
and just lost their chance at a gold medal

Ask the homeless man on the street corner
Who will never know the luxury of crisp clean sheets
Or a hearty home cooked meal

Ask the young girl
Who spends her time completely alone
without someone who loves her


If you were to ask me,
what my life is like without you


I would tell you there are no words


It is a feeling..


only felt.
©2006-2009 =mskate
:iconmskate:

Author's Comments

Inspired by recent events in my life.

For someone very, very special. I don't think I will ever write ANYTHING like this for anyone again.


I can't forget you

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~MutinyOfDaHeart28 Apr 5, 2006, 3:38:14 AM
This is great...... the describing of feelings is really awesome, and it strikes a nerve that makes me want to cry, but in a good way.... keep up the good work!

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~summertimesnow Apr 5, 2006, 3:39:10 AM
:)

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~NohaMich Apr 5, 2006, 3:44:51 AM
Love lost is hard to comprehend...only filled with regrets and 'too late'.

Learning to live after experiencing it is the harderst part.

Good luck.. be happy

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A ship at port is safe, but this is not what ships are for!
:iconmskate:
=mskate Apr 5, 2006, 4:14:00 AM
Thank you, hopefully one day ....
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~darkrainbow Apr 5, 2006, 8:27:41 AM
Wow...this is really great :nod:
I am touched.

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&. life is what happens to you while you're making other plans.
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~JustinThymePendragon Apr 5, 2006, 10:10:03 AM
Awesome! From the Heart!

:heart: :sun: :heart:

:hug:

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=GirlAnachronism7 Apr 5, 2006, 6:05:26 PM
great poem. heartbreaks are never fun and take a long time to heal from. But things will get better, we're still young. There'll be someone else for you, whether you want another person right now or not, it'll be for the better in the end and hopefully you'll realize that. Hope you feel better soon!

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and all the mysteries that you keep to yourself
are all the miseries that you hide from the world
and you'd die just to get what you want
but what for?
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~lovelybutterfly Apr 6, 2006, 10:54:21 AM
Wow!, really amazing... I don´t have words to explain this...I have the same feeling in this moment...
You don´t know what it means to me...

...Lucila
:iconborghild:
~Borghild Apr 6, 2006, 6:54:04 PM
I love this, this is really great
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